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Cold email audit result
28
Grade F
Generic flattery with zero proof or specificity.
BIGGEST LEVER
Personalization: add one real, specific signal about Sarah or TechCorp and the email immediately stands out from 90 percent of her inbox.

Dimensions

Personalization
1/10
No real signal cited at all.
Specificity of ask
3/10
Vague 'quick call' with no anchor.
Length
6/10
Short but padded with filler.
Tone match
2/10
Reads like a mass-blast template.
Value clarity
3/10
Offering is undefined and generic.
Send-readiness
7/10
No hard deliverability flags present.

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Cold email audit: 28/100

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